Board Thread:Suggestions/@comment-26960607-20160629031332/@comment-26960607-20160629031556

I will be "Revamping" many of my Concepts and I think I'm a bit rusty. So if you guys see any Problems I currently have with these Concepts. Point them out for me but also try to tell me what I should change it to, just to be a bit more precise...

Oh by the way, for the Description, if you want me to remove the First Few Sentences about his Origin, then why don't you guys also remove the "A Knight Hailing From An Unknown Kingdom" from Major's Description then?